Broken poem – Dawn

And if you dare to say goodbye

Locked dark doors will open up for you.

From your ashes you can burn

Keep your deepest secrets safe and sound.

Away from knives.

Buried in doom.

You only ache,

Craving for the dawn.


Now you’re free.

Now, ah… sugar.

Now, you fly.

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  1. Brilliant piece of poetry

  2. There are three ways to read this:


    By design I presume. Nice work regardless. I also love the site redesign.

    • Thank you so much, the emotion I write through is only one, but this is just what I want, to awake different ghosts in every reader, so thank you for your kind words 🙂 and yes thank you, I’m working on the site and trying to make it a bit better every day. Have an amazing day!

  3. I admit, I am tempted to ask what emotion you were going for. But I think it’s best left for my own pondering.

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